Comments on: Friday Haiku: Gotta Have My Pops!

By: Katharine

Katharine — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 17:38:07 +0000

You wow editor.
Your haiku so erudite.
Cute has no season.

By: andrea b.

andrea b. — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 15:51:51 +0000

oops! missed a sylabobble:

Well loved rat, here – eat.
Corn pops in cream. You see now?
See how I love you?

By: andrea b.

andrea b. — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 15:50:36 +0000

Well loved rat, here – eat.
Corn pops in cream. You see?
See how I love you?

By: Vanessa

Vanessa — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 12:57:18 +0000

You’re all brilliant!

By: Nucleus

Nucleus — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 10:28:26 +0000

Here I was, looking
At a wombat in a box
I could have seen rat!!

By: binky-mama

binky-mama — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 09:01:42 +0000

Oh dear lord help meh….that looks like dumbo rat….aaaaaaand my heart is in a puddle. Sorry, I fail at haiku.

By: Patti

Patti — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 07:58:03 +0000

“I have gift for you
Gift is pretty golden rat”
that is what he said !!

Will that do – I hope it is acceptable – did not someone want a “that is what he said” in a Haiku, I live the other side the pond (UK) and I love cute overload.
I write haiku – often – sometimes they help to sort out problemos.
**gets up faces west and makes lovely Japanese BOW – Oh SO**

By: pipegeek

pipegeek — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 06:29:39 +0000

flattened dumbo ears
highlight nomming rattie face
you now have the plague

By: Jessy

Jessy — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 03:30:05 +0000

Bounteous breakfast,
Buoyant Pops in milk, a rat’s
Cornucopia.

By: kibblenibble

kibblenibble — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 02:05:15 +0000

CO folks’ haikus
creative and humorous
make this lady’s day