Comments on: Friday Haiku: Sharing Is Caring

By: Lauren

Lauren — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 05:03:11 +0000

Can this be cuter?
Yes or No or Maybe, if…
Mini Bunny wig!

(…in hot pink… think about it!)

By: brinnann

brinnann — Tue, 22 Sep 2009 16:05:27 +0000

Well, I had used spaces to show where the syllables fell, but it didn’t quite work. Lemme try that again.

Horses are friendly
1… 2…. 3… 4….. 5
And bunnies are so much fun
1…. 2… 3….. 4…. 5.. 6……. 7
I love to pet them
1 2… 3. 4…. 5

By: brinnann

brinnann — Tue, 22 Sep 2009 16:03:19 +0000

Let’s use yours and make it into a proper haiku:

Horses are friendly
1 2 3 4 5
And bunnies are so much fun
1 2 3 4 5 6 7
I love to pet them
1 2 3 4 5

By: brinnann

brinnann — Tue, 22 Sep 2009 16:00:25 +0000

lace wigs, a haiku is three lines with the following amount of syllables:

5 syll.
7 syll.
5 syll.

Go back and count out some of the other ones in the post. While not all of them are accurate, you’ll see the pattern.

By: lace wigs

lace wigs — Tue, 22 Sep 2009 15:14:21 +0000

horses are so friendly
and bunnies are so much fun
to pet

is this a haiku?

By: Paunchie

Paunchie — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 18:17:59 +0000

horticulture <—- HAHAHA! *snerk*

By: E Z Reader

E Z Reader — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 17:06:54 +0000

(ref comment 130) Even an old joke is new to somebody. This could rouse its own nuffers but I cannot help myself, here’s your sentence: “You can lead a horticulture but you can’t make her think.”

[Any nuffers will have Dorothy Parker to answer to. And they'll have to go through me first. - Ed.]

By: Kiragirl

Kiragirl — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 16:35:49 +0000

If I step on eet
I will then have four white feet,
four winter snow feet

By: wannadance

wannadance — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 01:58:02 +0000

LS: i know i certainly did. it was my day….

steven: also, in wrong reference, in correct spirit: ‘no praise, no blame’ .

throw them yarrow sticks

By: LS

LS — Sun, 20 Sep 2009 22:27:24 +0000

Did everyone run out and get a lobotomy? Is that it?