Comments on: Friday Haiku: Shell We Dance?

By: Leanna

Leanna — Mon, 24 Aug 2009 18:49:16 +0000

she was ripe, but he
knew that slow and steady wins
the race to first base.

By: Dave

Dave — Mon, 24 Aug 2009 18:01:17 +0000

But only 3 months if she cooks

By: anastasia

anastasia — Sun, 23 Aug 2009 21:09:47 +0000

Have you ever felt
A kiss from a fishy
On a moonlit night?

By: bookmonstercats

bookmonstercats — Sun, 23 Aug 2009 16:34:33 +0000

Sorry, NOMTOM. At least “Teho” and “NOMTOM” have the same number of syllables, so the haiku what I wrote is not ruined (wot a shame that would have been – not). @wannadance, I am so jealous. I want to marry all the Cute Overlords, or even a little part of them. I’m sure Mr and the Missuses Cute Overlords will all understand…..

By: nisielli

nisielli — Sat, 22 Aug 2009 04:09:24 +0000

I like Wendy's one, MissKitty's one and thinkin' that uracak's one. But 'thinkin' that uracak', isn't your name rude? I mean that uoryay amenay siay 'inkintha hathay ouya reay a ckcaay' and 'ckcay' ansmeay 'hitsay'. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I thought it's a bit mean. And is 'bleen' rude? I didn't even know it had a meaning. I like thinkin's one because it isn't about sloppy romance like everybody else's. I like to see some creativity. So here's my haiku: Crimes against nature Such as turtle kissing fish Really freaks me out [You think maybe it's going to escape me that you ARE "Thinkin' that ura-" (etc.) ? Are you familiar with the term "Fraudience"? Cut it out. - Ed.]

By: Diana

Diana — Sat, 22 Aug 2009 03:52:08 +0000

Turtle and stuffed fish
Meet and greet each other with
Eskimo kisses.

By: thinkin' that ura

thinkin' that ura — Sat, 22 Aug 2009 03:46:57 +0000

Turtle:

Kiss a fish? That’s gross.
Oh my god a movie scene?
No way in the world.

Pardon, what was that?
Did you say a million bucks?
I could buy a house.

Maybe…. oh all right.
Lights, camera, action, *smooch*
Hey, this is a plush!

By: Lalaith

Lalaith — Sat, 22 Aug 2009 02:43:45 +0000

OMG!! I have that exact stuffed fish!!!

By: Cordelia

Cordelia — Sat, 22 Aug 2009 01:29:29 +0000

It’s a better match than Bennifer was!

By: gillian

gillian — Sat, 22 Aug 2009 00:25:28 +0000

my turtle hero
rescued me from infant bed
kid tried to nom me

fish escapes mobile
went round and round to music
i’m dizzy. kiss me!

rainbow fish finds love
with hard shelled painted he-man
kiss me my hero!

our love illicit
we secretly meet on sly
nose rubs and snorgles

my painted suitor
i’ve waited to kiss your lips
they taste like chicken!

hard on the outside
green, warm, soft on the inside
a perfect love soup

multi colored fish
longing for you now sated
your red lips are hot

your colored dorsal
your sexy wings of deep blue
fly over and kiss me!

no one understands
our inter-species affair
breaks no natural rules

put that camera down!
banish the paparazzi
our love is private