Sunday Wrapup: Comment of the Week

by Meg on May 28, 2006

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The post "Cat box" prompted Michelle to write this kick-ass poem:

"Padriac’s Parents had recycle paper -
A stack that resembled a smallish skyscraper.
The recycle truck was soon to arrive,
So they wrangled the stack to the end of the drive.

Padriac’s Pop hollered "Bend at the knees!",
As the mountain of boxes swayed in the breeze.
Once they got started they couldn’t well stop,
And the boxes on top were now starting to drop!

It’s a good thing Padraic had trained all the cats
From very small kittens to quickly react,
In case of a breeze-triggered paper stack sway
To prevent the dropped boxes from blowing away!

Hooray!"

Posted by:Michelle |May 25, 2006 at 10:34 PM
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{ 20 comments }

1 Gizmo 05.28.06 at 10:44 pm

Michelle really gets the C.O. award (called the Qootie?) for the week with her poem…

2 Twentythreecakes 05.28.06 at 11:01 pm

Awesome poem! Qootie is well deserved. The marmalade looks exatly like my Gushcat!

3 Eliza 05.28.06 at 11:15 pm

Huzzah! that was loverly! Teehee box kitties get me giggling…

4 Svenster 05.28.06 at 11:22 pm

Well done Michelle! *fanfare*
That poem makes me wish I could ryme. I mean not as good as you, obviously, more like… at all.

HUZZA!

5 Dannee 05.29.06 at 12:04 am

Aaah, I was thinking this poem deserved more attention! n___n

6 petgirl 05.29.06 at 2:13 am

brilliant!

7 Yano 05.29.06 at 7:39 am

Totally awesome (~ ^3^)~

8 Ilmatar 05.29.06 at 2:40 pm

Hahaha, that was a totally kick ass poem! \o/

9 Carlisa 05.29.06 at 3:25 pm

wOw!!! That is a great poem, Michele!

10 Carlisa 05.29.06 at 3:26 pm

Ooops…MICHELLE (2 L’s)

11 RavishingRoberta 05.29.06 at 3:55 pm

Great Poem Michelle. I Could Just See The Kitties Run To Help Out.

12 robyn 05.29.06 at 5:04 pm

Awesome poem Michelle!

13 alice 05.29.06 at 5:59 pm

Bravo! :D

14 Liz R 05.29.06 at 9:34 pm

“In case of a breeze-triggered paper stack sway” is a line worthy of Dr. Seuss. Wow!

15 Theo 05.30.06 at 12:55 am

Liz R — heh, yeah, the meter is the same as in The Lorax, even. All you’d need is some grickle-grass.

I like it the way it is, tho. (Both “The Lorax” and Michelle’s dilly.)

16 A thinker 05.30.06 at 12:16 pm

Rah Michelle!

17 Kate 05.30.06 at 2:13 pm

Michelle you ROCK! >^o^<

18 CC 05.30.06 at 2:57 pm

Excellent! I see you have read your share of Dr. Suess in your youth! Rhyming Rocks!

19 Subhangi 07.30.06 at 2:35 pm

Michelle – I bow to thee.

20 Melinda 08.15.06 at 7:27 pm

Awesome poem from an awesomely cute photo!

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